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Sources

Your sources don't come from the library. You need to find new sources. It shouldn't be hard to find great information on your topic using the library catalog and databases. Josef Horáček (talk) 02:22, 21 February 2016 (UTC)

Professor Horacek

I was able to find a LSU library source dealing with moments and inertia and made appropriate changes. However for my second source edit I could not find an LSU source directly relating linear and variable spring rate and its affects on automobile handing. Please consider this, I looked through many articles on the LSU Library databases.

Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rich wiki50300243 (talk • contribs) 02:24, 24 February 2016 (UTC)

You'd probably have better luck finding that information in a textbook or a reference book. You can use your current source, but you'll get a lower grade. If you want to get a better grade, get help from a librarian and find a better source. Either way, go ahead and add the sources to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 15:53, 25 February 2016 (UTC)

The Lead

Your lead is a good start. Here are some suggestions: 1. no comma after "Texas" in the first sentence; 2. mention the year when the Colt first started playing; 3. in the last sentence, replace "zero" with "no." Once you make the revisions, you can post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:23, 28 February 2016 (UTC)