User talk:RicardoUSVI94/sandbox

Feedback

Preliminary sources? Also, check the Talk page for this article, where someone has suggested it be deleted. Will you be able to find enough material to distinguish this article from the Steam turbine article?

Feedback on 2nd draft

• Address peer review comments re: clarity, typos
• Some sources are self-published, as discussed in consultation. Need more reliable sources.
• Break history section into smaller paragraphs
• First reference missing information

Michelev (talk) 20:13, 16 April 2014 (UTC)