User talk:Resolute/Sandbox2

Halifax Explosion

In general, I like your layout. Some queries:

1. Keep the first section as Halifax in wartime, or make it a more general "background" section? Is there any other background info that would help the reader understand the article?
2. Which of the "above" are you thinking of merging Communities into?
3. Not sure "fire" is the clearest title, as there was a fire both on the ship pre-explosion and in the city post-explosion
4. It's not entirely clear to me which of your proposed sections would include the aftermath and blizzard material

Other than that, looks good. In terms of sourcing, I have access to a pretty good Canadian university library (with decent ILL services), plus a lot of historical databases, so we should be able to pull in enough RS material to make this work. Nikkimaria (talk) 21:59, 28 November 2011 (UTC)