Peer Review For Rosario
The first sentence is a run on. I’m pretty sure that we are not supposed to be using quotes. This is written more like a scholarly article, and its good, but for Wikipedia it needs to be more cut and dry, and neutral. Here’s how I would organize and article on Women and Social Media….
1. History- say something about how women have little control over images portrayed in the media because of their absence in the workplace. 2. Women have created their own social media platforms in response to this. Some of these include…Name the women associated with each cause and maybe say what the platforms do in your own, neutral terms. 3. How this is changing the social media climate by bringing women’s centered issues such as…to the forefront.
All of those sections should be space for easy visibility