User talk:RealShirty/Social anxiety

Latest comment: 7 months ago by A5phan in topic Peer Review

Peer Review

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Hello,

It was interesting to read your article and learn more about social anxiety. I feel that it would be beneficial if you were to mark down which areas of the article that you added on to. I noticed that you made a lot of words about "hyperviligance followed by..". Maybe this could be explained more. Otherwise, great work!! A5phan (talk) 03:31, 5 November 2023 (UTC)Reply