User talk:RIP Papa Franku 2011-2017/Pooh's Hunny Hunt sandbox

Adding Sources

I wasn't sure which of your sandboxes you're using for this assignment, so I'm responding to both. In this sandbox, only one of your sources appears to come from library resources. The second comes from the company itself and hinges on promotion, so it's probably not the best source you could find. Also, instead of providing a URL, you should include complete bibliographic information. If you wish to use this sandbox for the assignment, make a revision within a week. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:13, 3 March 2018 (UTC)

The revision looks great. Go ahead and add the sources to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 17:51, 22 April 2018 (UTC)

I see you added your sources to the article, but you did it wrong. Most people won't be able to access those links because they point to a subscription-only database. Instead, you should have entered in all the bibliographic details (author name etc.). If you have time to fix it in the next few days for a better grade, you can. Otherwise I will consider this assignment finished. Josef Horáček (talk) 00:24, 1 May 2018 (UTC)