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Your submission at Articles for creation: 8minutenergy (November 13)

Latest comment: 5 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft is written from the viewpoint of the company, focusing on what the company says about itself. Corporate notability is based on what independent reliable sources have written about the company. See WP:Markup for how to mark section headings. Section headings are delimited by equal signs (=), which are used to construct the table of contents of a page.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 05:25, 13 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

Hello, QueensExpert11372! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 05:25, 13 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

Inquiry

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All of your edits have been to 8minutenergy. Do you have a financial or other connection? If so, please see the conflict of interest policy and make the required declaration. Robert McClenon (talk) 15:18, 13 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

:@Robert McClenon: Yes. I believe I added the proper disclosure now to my user page. Apologies if I din't do that properly. Editing and adding a Wikipage is not my primary job or function. The company is noteworthy & one of the largest and most important in the solar industry. They have the record low price in the United States for solar. The article is backed up by numerous articles from reputable national and trade publications.Appreciate your feedback and patience.QueensExpert11372 (talk) 18:44, 13 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:8minutenergy. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 15:19, 13 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: 8minutenergy (November 13)

Latest comment: 5 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft is still written from the point of view of the company (or would-be customer) rather than that of the general reader.

In response to a concern that a draft is written from the viewpoint of the company, it is not useful to reference-bomb the draft. The company probably is notable, but notability must be attested in the body of the document.

This draft is the work of a declared paid editor. It illustrates that one of the hazards of (ethical) paid editing is that the paid editor, like other employees, inherently has a corporate perspective, which is not what Wikipedia is looking for.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 23:30, 13 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: 8minutenergy (November 23)

Latest comment: 5 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Vincent60030 were:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

no it's still not in a NPOV

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VKZY^LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 13:33, 23 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: 8minutenergy (November 26)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chetsford was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

At first glance it looks impressively sourced. On closer examination many of the sources are not WP:RS; some which appear to be RS (e.g. the AP) are actually just BusinessWire press releases.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Chetsford (talk) 19:27, 26 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

MfD nomination of Draft:8minutenergy

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Draft:8minutenergy, a page which you created or substantially contributed to, has been nominated for deletion. Your opinions on the matter are welcome; you may participate in the discussion by adding your comments at Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Draft:8minutenergy and please be sure to sign your comments with four tildes (~~~~). You are free to edit the content of Draft:8minutenergy during the discussion but should not remove the miscellany for deletion template from the top of the page; such a removal will not end the deletion discussion. Thank you. –User 45 65 41 15:49, 7 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

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