User talk:Ponads17/sandbox2

6/8/2019 Evaluation by DrMichaelWright

DrMichaelWright (talk) 14:21, 8 June 2019 (UTC)

I hope that you will add your meat to Wikipedia, but I was hoping for more content than this.

• Points: 36/40
• Grade: 90%

Spelling/Grammar

Meets standard.

• "...by the same airline management,..." what does this mean. The same management company? Flight control?

Language

Meets standard.

Organization

Meets standard.

Coding

Nearly meets standard.

• A number of things in the text could have used a hyperlink to their respective articles.
• There were two code errors in the references that could have easily been fixed.

Validity

Meets standard.

Completion

Does not meet standard.

• There could have been much more meat added to those bones.

Relevance

Meets standard.

Sources

Nearly meets standard.

• You have 5 high-quality sources.
• Yes, it can be hard to find high-quality sources, but that just means more digging. See below for some things that might be found using those sources. These took longer to write and reference than they took to find, using the library databases. Also, perhaps you missed what I said about official sources in Module 4.

Citations

Meets standard.

• You occasionally leave a space between the period at the end of a sentence and the citation note that supports it. There should be no such space. A style guide for how to do so can be seen here.

References

Meets standard.

• You use a fuller date format than is required for journal articles. For journal articles, a year is sufficient. Other formats frequently cause code problems, as is the case here.

Since 2009 the railway connection between Verona and Bologna is served by a high-speed rail line, allowing speeds of up to 200km/h. As the central part of the planned Trans-European Transport Network (TEN-T), the north-south corridor going through the Alps to Verona is scheduled for improvement with high-speed rail lines. The implementation of the higher speed rail lines will improve travel times to Munich from nearly 5 and a half hours to a projected three, thus making it faster than car travel by an hour and a half.

Verona is considered a highly efficient airport. In 2010, with just 8 gates, Verona airport serviced over 3 million passengers with 24 airlines going to and from 31 destinations.