User talk:Pkccccj/sandbox

Hello, I'm Yehan Lee and I'm taking a class ‘Collective Intelligence’. I read the article written in your sandbox well. From the definition of a beauty store to history, to the recent beauty industry, it was easy to write articles and read them, especially with appropriate pictures. To give you one feedback, I felt that the content was empty in the middle, moving directly from the description of the beauty industry to the example of the beauty store. In the meantime, I hope there will be more diverse contents such as how the beauty industry has become popular and what kind of beauty industry is popular recently. I think it'll be a better article!--Lee ye han (talk) 12:08, 9 May 2021 (UTC)