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Your submission at Articles for creation: David Kahn (March 4)

Latest comment: 5 months ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by GSS was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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GSS ^💬 04:53, 4 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

AfC notification: Draft:David Kahn (martial artist) has a new comment

Latest comment: 4 months ago2 comments2 people in discussion

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:David Kahn (martial artist). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 05:37, 29 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello;

Thank you for your comment, and I will follow your direction. Phenomenon 10 (talk) 13:58, 1 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Kahn (martial artist) (July 21)

Latest comment: 8 days ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by SafariScribe were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:David Kahn (martial artist) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 19:47, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello SafariScribe,

Can you please be more specific about why the second version of this article has been rejected?

The first version was edited to update the sources and these sources appear to meet the required criteria: reliable, verifiable significant coverage that is published, reliable, secondary, independent of the subject . . .

Thank you. Phenomenon 10 (talk) 13:58, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Phenomenon 10! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 19:47, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

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