More Formal Please

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Hi Phatinc!

Could you please ensure that future contributions are more formal and encylopedic in style. Your contributions to the Baulkham Hills High School article had used several Colloquial terms and was written in a rather inapropriate, informal fashion.


Your main contribution, that of the Trivia section in the Baulkham Hills High School article was excluded after Daveb reworded of the article. You may wish to add your contributions again, but with more appropriate wording. Your contributions are valued!

Thanks.

Evilhobo | [msg] 08:03, 19 September 2005 (UTC)Reply