User talk:Peterorfanos/sandbox

Peer review

This article has a lot of good content, maybe just structure it in a bit plainer language rather than using terms like the "cry for". Additionally I think that adding titles and headings in bold could help users navigate the article easier. Overall the sources were cited properly and I think that adding a few more sources could help increase the credibility of the article. Make sure to finish out the last paragraph. Brooke.baker873 (talk) 00:00, 23 October 2019 (UTC)