Pô l'Ère d'Hoche

Baume (watch)

Bonjour,

Je comprends pas votre commentaire? Il n'y a la rien de promotionnel, j'ai rajouté l'information sur toutes les marques du groupe

Hello (if you don't mind, I prefer to answer in English in case someone else wants to read this), by "promotional" I mean that the wording is clearly biased : you cannot write "an ode of BAUME’s way of conceiving the future" on Wikipedia. As for the content, I cannot be as decisive: if you want to rewrite it in a more neutral way, then suit yourself, I won't stop you (even if, in my opinion, a paragraph entitled "Limited Edition" has probably nothing to do here). --Pô l'Ère d'Hoche (talk) 16:42, 15 February 2019 (UTC)