User talk:OliveYouToo/sandbox

Assessment of Article Draft

Ready for mainspace

This is well-written and integrates very well into the existing page. You need to fix some errors in the references, making sure that all references include the author, article title, journal/magazine title, number and volume (if known--Sight & Sound and Positif are both missing this, and the info was included in your annotated bibliography) and date published. Also, you should list IMDB and Mubi as external links, rather than citing them as sources.

Then go ahead and add your material to the existing page! Good job!

--110laurent (talk) 23:14, 21 February 2016 (UTC)