User talk:Ocean.Melody/sandbox
Lots of great and new information for me to read! I feel as though you can alter your taxonomy section a tad bit. You could possibly state that at the higher levels of classification, the information is variable depending on the source. Your taxo box says it's in Kingdom Chromaveolata, which isn't stated in your taxonomy section at all. However, it looks as though the lower classifications (class, order, family, and genus) are consistent. You can probably rewrite or even expand on the sentence dealing with the chromatophores if possible. Well done though and very detailed! Mmoneil1 (talk) 20:39, 21 March 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review edit
It looks pretty solid at this point. The only real issue is some minor grammatical and capitalization issues here and there. And as the previous reviewer stated, the sentence on chromatophores could use a little love. LiaElf76 (talk) 20:49, 21 March 2016 (UTC)
Looks great, obviously a lot more information than the original article. Looks organized nicely. Double check grammatical errors in a few places. (Mchamilt708 (talk) 03:14, 22 March 2016 (UTC))
This looks great! Your citations look nice, maybe you could show me how to do it because I just can't seem to get it. Other than that I really like your topic and the organization of your page is awesome!MarinaBarrineau (talk) 00:50, 25 March 2016 (UTC)MarinaBarrineau