Obiwann90

Orli Shoshan article - Helps, questions and answers to update it

Hello, I'm Puffin. Wikipedia is written by people who have a wide diversity of opinions, but we try hard to make sure articles have a neutral point of view. Your recent edit to Orli Shoshan seemed less than neutral to me, so I removed it for now. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Puffin ^{Let's talk!} 20:37, 11 February 2015 (UTC)

Please do not add commentary or your own personal analysis to Wikipedia articles, as you did to Orli Shoshan. Doing so violates Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy and breaches the formal tone expected in an encyclopedia. Thank you. Puffin ^{Let's talk!} 22:47, 11 February 2015 (UTC)

Hi,Puffin! If I well understand, for example : I can write " She is an actress " but I can't write " She is a great actress " ?! And today I saw that my last modifications about " occupation " info were deleted again !! I wrote " Home staging & interior design at O Designs By Orli Shoshan, LLC / Real estate agent at Dream Town / Model & actress at Lily's Talent Agency (LTA) ". I don't understand why this Wikipedia user ( 50.101.38.143 ) deleted it ? Moreover he didn't send me a message to explain why. These informations are true and verifiable on Orli Shoshan's website. The website is yet specified in article !! How to contribute on Wikipedia if there is always a user to delete brought modifications ??!! Tell me ! Thank you for you help and instructions.Obiwann90 (talk) 12:50, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

Yes, you're right about the phrasing that is appropriate to use in the article. As for the IP address that undid your edit, it may be better to ask them on their talk page. However, in the future, you can avoid people from undoing your edits by using a detailed edit summary and citing your sources, with an appropriate inline citation. Puffin ^{Let's talk!} 18:47, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

Your change added external links, but see the maintenance tag that has been placed on the page: the sources remain unclear due to a lack of inline citations. Puffin ^{Let's talk!} 22:42, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

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Puffin ^{Let's talk!} 22:52, 11 February 2015 (UTC)

Orli Shoshan picture deleted on Orli Shoshan article

Hi Magog the Ogre, I'm helping Orli Shoshan actress to update her Wikipedia article. February 11th you have deleted " OrliShoshan.jpg " which I uploaded, for violation copyright reasons. The picture is the propriety of Lynne Peters, the Orli Shoshan's photographer. Her website is : http://www.lynnepeters.com/ She said about this file deletion : " They have my copyright permission. "

To proove it, you can see the screenshot here of my personnal Facebook conversation with Orli Shoshan. You can also contact Lynne Peters photographer to check the copyright permission directly with her, here

So I would like to ask you to restore this file access in order to display again this picture on Orli Shoshan page. Thank you so much for your help !

Obiwann90