Nrust10

I really liked the Biography section you both added (one quick grammar error I noticed was that you guys wrote “he has moved” instead of “had moved” that’s it however)! Besides that I think you guys effectively described Brawley and his character. A suggestion I have is if you could possibly find a source and/or add a couple lines primarily about his family? Overall, really great article and great sense of neutrality in tone and writing style.

Burgess-Ware: Both sections on Burgess-Ware’s writing were really good and packed with information. Definitely neutral and I did not see any grammar or structure mistakes. For Ave Maria however, maybe you could add at the conclusion of the section the literary effect of the story, similar to how the Octroon had. You could state if the book was popular, if it was inspired by her life, and what themes of the time scholars said it has shown, etc. I think this would make the Wiki. page more informative! Great job! Angelina.deltoro (talk) 00:51, 21 November 2020 (UTC)

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 12:46, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

I really liked the Biography section you both added (one quick grammar error I noticed was that you guys wrote “he has moved” instead of “had moved” that’s it however)! Besides that I think you guys effectively described Brawley and his character. A suggestion I have is if you could possibly find a source and/or add a couple lines primarily about his family? Overall, really great article and great sense of neutrality in tone and writing style. Angelina.deltoro (talk) 00:56, 21 November 2020 (UTC)