Nrkblue
Joined 12 October 2009
Latest comment: 8 years ago by CalzGuy in topic Sing Street
Sing Street edit
You changed the wording of the plot summary on Sing Street last week and introduced the term "alleged". I questioned it as it is a peacock term and requested clarification with a {{whom}} template. Today you removed that template and gave a reason in your edit summary, which was pretty accurate. However, that still leaves the use of the word alleged. The prose need to be clearer. Leaving "alleged" in there without any clarification just doesn't work. I had used the term "ostensibly equally high repute" but I am happy to change that if you have a suitable alternative. "Alleged" isn't it. Perhaps a discussion on the article Talk page might be appropriate? CalzGuy (talk) 12:40, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
- Hi again. You have also removed the terms antagonist and protagonist for a second time and mentioned that the guidelines say they shouldn't be used. WP:MOSFILM doesn't say that. And WP:ANTAGONIST and WP:PROTAGONIST don't either. So what are you referring to? I have restored them. CalzGuy (talk) 13:25, 4 April 2016 (UTC)