Nimarazmjoo
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Thermodynamic modelling edit
Hi Nimarazmjoo, the adjective "powerful" in the lead section may not be considered neutral, I would rewrite the lead section of your article. Also, please remember that you will have to move the references at the end of the sentences or paragraphs they are supporting. You might also add a Further reading section, but only the references are mandatory. Jaqen (talk) 08:13, 5 July 2023 (UTC)
Hello again, the lead section should usually begin with a sentence like " Thermodynamic modelling is ...". More info in MOS:FIRST. --Jaqen (talk) 14:45, 5 July 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks for the feedback! I'll take it into account. Nimarazmjoo (talk) 14:48, 5 July 2023 (UTC)
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Well-researched, clear and easy to read lead section. Thank you for the contribution!
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