User talk:Neo167/Sambhaji Bhagat

Latest comment: 13 years ago by KatyLynnScarlett

NOTES TO THE AUTHOR: This has a slant to it that makes it read as though a friend or close relative wrote this about this gentleman. I stopped editing it because the overall tone was less of one coming from a reporter and more like an introduction of a performer before an audience. Try to change some small things in the writing so that it is more balanced and objective. I will come back to this in a few days. I'm interested to read more. KatyLynnScarlett (talk) 22:13, 18 October 2010 (UTC)KatyLynnScarlettReply