Naomiis
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 06:44, 31 January 2017 (UTC)
Article Review edit
I think this is a very inspirational and interesting topic related to our class! These women, although all have suffered an unspeakable loss, have an unwavering basis for social justice reforms. I can understand where beginning to compile information for a topic like this can seem overwhelming because it can be taken in so many directions. I came up with a few questions that may help direct your research, for they are things that I would want to see if I was researching information about this topic. I also included an article that would help answer one of the questions!
- Why do the mothers support Clinton? Was part of her campaign legislation to help children like theirs? (see: https://www.theguardian.com/us-news/2016/oct/24/mothers-of-the-movement-hillary-clinton-african-american-vote)
- Are any of the mothers aligned with other movements? Perhaps, Movement for Black Lives?
- Have the mothers' advocation contributed to any legislation being passed in their home states/cities?
- Do the mothers have a strong social media presence?
Best of Luck! Meaghanfrost (talk) 19:22, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
Article Review By Murilo Francisco edit
You obviously got an article which was not very complete which can be pretty challenging. You added citation which was great but I believe much more information could still be added. Perhaps you should do some more research and then find the way to spit the info between different sections. I think your contributions were good but the article still needs some more work Mbfrancisco1 (talk) 19:15, 9 March 2017 (UTC)