User:NNU-10-24100128/Model United Nations Association edit

Hello I have corrected my spelling mistakes and specify"the institude of foreign language",in other words,all the mistakes you mentioned I have corrected.About the title,I think it's all right,because what I want to introduce is an association in Nanjing Normal University,if I change the name,it will not accord with the content,so I hope that you can read again and think twice,the best result is that you can accept my article.Of course,if you also want me to make some change,I am willing to do so. user: NNU-10-24100128

Hello again. Thankyou for responding. Here are some more suggestions: It is not up to me to reject or decide to keep the article, unless someone else decides to request that it is deleted. Rather it can be up to others in the Wikipedia community to decide by policy and consensus. Anyway the guideline for organisations is in WP:Org. The next comment is that baike.baidu does not count as a reliable source. This is because any one can change it. Take a read of Wikipedia:Citing sources which will explain how to do the inline referencing. To get the text formatted into paragraphs, put a whole blank line between the paragraphs, rather than just a carriage return. Past tense of send is sent. I note you still have "our university", this is written from the wrong point of view for Wikipedia an encyclopedia. You as a person should not appear in the article. To do an internal link to other Wikipedia articles you can do this: [[China Science and Technology University]] giving this effect: China Science and Technology University. Also Unversity, depatments, intertional, dipomalic all have misspellings. Lastly there is a word "marcom" that I do not understand at all. Do you mean Marxism? Graeme Bartlett (talk) 23:31, 30 September 2011 (UTC)Reply
dear student. the article is easy to find, but not in the official wikipedia yet (it is in your "user space", which is a good place to edit; if it is good enough, it can go to the wikipedia). The suggestions by graeme are good. I suggest you follow them all (so: sended-->sent. don't put "our university" etc). If you have a picture, follow (self taken! not just from the internet) this procedure (here). If you have problems, just let me know here (this is your talk page, which you'll reach by clicking "my talk" in the top of your screen). Good luck! L.tak (talk) 16:02, 1 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

Dear L.,I also want to know why I can't link to my article on the students' list,I found the title of my article is red,and when I click the link ,it just reflects the article doesn't exist and the page means I should creat the article,I don't know why,please help me,thank you!

, Well, when it was still in user space, the link was User:NNU-10-24100128/Nanjing Normal University Model United Nations Association, not Model United Nations Association of the institude of foreign languages. The good thing there is that you could develop it quietly, without running the risk of deletion (yet) etc. Now, I see you have moved it to main space, someone has tagged it for deletion as it does not conform to our notability guidelines and it is not reliably sourced. What I suggest you to do, is to read two things:
  • WP:ORG about the notability of organizations. It shows that some organizations are relevant and good, but... not notable
  • WP:RS, which shows which sources are needed to establish notability.

After that I want you to think about your options:

    • Is it possible to make the article in conformation to those guidelines? And should the title then not be: MOdel United Nations of NNU?
    • Would it be possible to change the article to Model United Nations of China? This is about the organization as a whole, and is maybe more probably to be notable.

Let me know if I can help. You can come to IRC if you want to chat as well. I am sure we can find a good article for you! L.tak (talk) 18:37, 1 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

 

You may want to consider using the Article Wizard to help you create articles.

If this is the first article that you have created, you may want to read the guide to writing your first article.

A tag has been placed on Model United Nations Association of the institude of foreign languages requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done because the article, which appears to be about a real person, individual animal(s), an organization (band, club, company, etc.), or web content, does not indicate how or why the subject of the article is important or significant: that is, why an article about it should be included in an encyclopedia. Under the criteria for speedy deletion, articles that do not indicate the subject's importance or significance may be deleted at any time. Please see the guidelines for what is generally accepted as notable.

If you can assert the importance of the subject,  . Clicking that button will take you to the talk page where you will find a pre-formatted place for you to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. You can also visit the article's talk page directly to give your reasons, but be aware that once tagged for speedy deletion, if the article meets the criterion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag yourself. You may freely add information to the article that would confirm the subject's notability under Wikipedia guidelines.

See the guidelines for specific types of articles: biographies, websites, bands, or companies. Mean as custard (talk) 18:15, 1 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

Article moved (the one mentioned above) edit

I've moved it to User:NNU-10-24100128/Model United Nations Association of the institute of foreign languages and changed 'institude' to 'institute' while I was doing it. Peridon (talk) 21:13, 1 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

A few helpful guidelines edit

Hello! There are a lot of rule on Wikipedia, but they are simpler than they look. You can even read most of them in Chinese if you need! There is no Chinese equivalent to WP:ORG [= WP:Notability (organizations and companies)], but the general notion of "notability" is explained at 关注度. Pay particular attention to the part called 通用关注度指引, or "General notability guidelines" (WP:GNG). A few editors have mentioned the page called WP:RS on "reliable sources." This notion is explained at 可靠來源. I put a list of other important pages on the Project talk page. I hope these guidelines will help you to write with confidence, and to produce a great article! Madalibi (talk) 01:45, 2 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

Your recent edits edit

  Hello. In case you didn't know, when you add content to talk pages and Wikipedia pages that have open discussion, you should sign your posts by typing four tildes ( ~~~~ ) at the end of your comment. You could also click on the signature button   or   located above the edit window. This will automatically insert a signature with your username or IP address and the time you posted the comment. This information is useful because other editors will be able to tell who said what, and when. Thank you. --SineBot (talk) 09:23, 2 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

I have remembered what you said and thank you for your reminding.besides,forgive me as a new user.--NNU-10-24100128 (talk) 09:28, 2 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

Keep up the hard work! edit

I can see that you are working hard, and although you are facing some challenges, Graeme and l.tak are making good suggestions for you. Don't be discouraged, and go on the IRC (QQ) system if you would like to have a dialogue with some of our helpers or me. Njnu-ban-xueshenghao (talk) 11:34, 2 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

Maybe take a look at this article... edit

Hello, If you haven't already, you can check out Model United Nations to get some ideas. Njnu-ban-xueshenghao (talk) 11:39, 2 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

your review is in! edit

 
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L.tak (talk) 17:50, 3 October 2011 (UTC)Reply


Message edit

  Hello. You have a new message at Anna Frodesiak's talk page. 14:25, 4 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

Draft guidebook for students participating in NNU Class Project - February 2012 edit

Per IRC discussion with course instructor Josh, I have started a draft guidebook to help the new group. No more pink boxes. Yay! Please feel free to rough-in sections, or just dump thoughts into the points section.

Best. Anna Frodesiak (talk) 05:34, 18 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Hello again! I have amended my article Changzhou Ancient Canal, I would like you to take a look at it and point out some mistakes. What's more,I want to know that when I want to introduce a tourist spot, how many aspects I can describe it? Thx!--Angell 24100128 (talk) 16:03, 20 December 2011 (UTC)Reply