Is this section written according to the Wiki Manual of Style? Look at the language choices they use to explain yes/no.
yes!
Does the author include evidence from the articles?
no. dont forget to cite where you got the facts and list references at the bottom.
Do you feel as though you understand each section’s importance in the context of the larger article?
yes. the titles for each section make it obvious
Do you notice any glaring technical issues that the author will need to correct?
no.
Does the author include citation footnotes in their section?
no.
If so, are they properly formatted?
Do you notice any missing information with the citations?
Overall, on a scale of 1-10, how effective would you say the group is in creating content for a Wikipedia article? Explain your score.
9. The sections are organized and put together well.
What is working best right now?
organization
What needs the most improvement?
Are there 600 words per person?