Mmehari
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editHello, Mmehari, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:18, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
Peer Review: TSE
editYour intro paragraph is clear and easy to understand. However, I would make one minor change. In the sentence "Testicular cancer typically presents with a painless testicular swelling or lump or any change....". I would change the positioning of the article "a" to read as "Testicular cancer typically presents with painless testicular swelling or a lump or any change.."
A minor change but for clarity, I would change the sentence "Recommendations vary with some physicians recommending the use of monthly TSE for men ages 15 to 55" to read as "Recommendations vary with some physicians recommending monthly TSEs for men ages 15 to 55"
A minor change but for clarity, I would change the sentence "The benefit of TSE is uncertain due to there being no randomized control trial studying the use of TSE" to "The benefit of TSE is uncertain due to the lack of randomized control trials focused on studying its use."
Overall great article!