User talk:MinnieVW/sandbox
Assignment 1 edit
Peer review edit
Assignment 3 Feedback: Hi there, hope you don't mind, I decided to review your draft and I found it be extremely informative. I think you have a nice range of topics, providing various types of information on your fungus which I really liked. If possible, I would love to see more information under the Industrial Use section, knowing more about it's application would be really interesting. Other than that, I found it to be well written and researched, so awesome job! April pat (talk) 16:47, 31 October 2013 (UTC)
Peer review edit
Hi there. I found your article to be really well done and showing good progress. I think you should just keep up the good work. Expand on your sections, convert your bullet points to actual sentences and paragraphs. Since your fungi is a pathogenic fungi of humans, you should probably include a section on treatment and prevention, if you can find literature on that. That will be of interest to the reader. I think you should also try to find more information on the industrial use of your fungi as well, as that will be interesting too.Hope that helps dude. Good luck with the rest of the assignment :)Ria99 (talk) 00:43, 1 November 2013 (UTC)
Hi Minnie! All the sections you've completed so far are quite thorough and robust, however there is one glaring factual inaccuracy in "Ecology": it's NaCl,not NaCL! Also a quick note I noticed from Dr. Scott saying to not start sentences with the genus abbreviation. Looking forward to see how the rest of it turns out.
Rptseng (talk) 05:21, 1 November 2013 (UTC)
Hi, Minnie! I really enjoyed reading your article, well done! For the disease part, you can maybe add more about treatment if there's any. Overall, it looks really good! Great job :) Good luck with the rest of your assginmgnet! Kchung325 (talk) 21:09, 4 November 2013 (UTC)