User talk:MichelleKangLucas/sandbox/The Musicians(Caravaggio)
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Boopertdaysunshine in topic peer review
peer review edit
The lead section was clear and easy to follow. It was concise but informational. The structure was clear and there was balanced coverage of information. Many sections were added, giving the reader much more content. The sections were balanced, whereas before the introduction was much longer than the rest of the article. In fact, there are currently only two sections in the article. The content is neutral, and the sources are reliable. All information added was reliably sourced and cited. There was a variety of sources cited such as websites and books. It may be helpful to link quasi-classical or explain what it means. Also, some context to what Caravaggio was doing at the time this was painted. Where was he in his career and interpersonal relations at the time? This is a great read so far!
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Boopertdaysunshine (talk) 20:55, 5 April 2023 (UTC)