User talk:Melindaelena/sandbox

Hi Melinda! I'm looking at your sandbox and finding your edits to contain a lot of substance. One of the things I stumbled onto, was the use of the term 'Rational' I noticed it wasn't a word that you had added but is one that was already in the article, but I would suggest considering changing that into different wording, as rational can be seen as a subjective term.

I can see that you've basically doubled the sources for this article which is impressive. Comparing your sandbox to the original page, you've organized what information you've changed in a very concise way, and it is much easier to follow through.

I think you're doing a great job, and I'm not finding anything major that I think you should focus on. I think the direction you've headed with organizing instead of necessarily adding a plethora of new information is a really great approach, being that there is already so much information on the wiki site, and to update and take out outdated or confusing information is definitely what this page really needs.

peer review reply

Hi Nicolette! I have reviewed your feedback and taken it into consideration. I saw the error the previous author made, which was using the word "rational," and have edited it out. I appreciate your feedback. Good luck on your project. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Melindaelena (talk • contribs) 19:40, 9 December 2017 (UTC)