Melbodde

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Hello, Melbodde

Thank you for creating Online Gravity (book).

User:Pppery, while examining this page as a part of our page curation process, had the following comments:

This was a pretty good article overall, but some future suggestions:

1. Don't use bare URLs; fill in proper citations
2. It would be helpful to expand on the reception section and not just say "the book was reviewed by foo, bar, and baz"

Check out the edits I made to the article to see these tips and others in action.

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* Pppery * _{it has begun...} 02:37, 6 August 2022 (UTC)