1. Develops good sections that all relate to the idea at hand. Haven't filled in yet, but based on conversation good understanding and explanation of topics 2. More content, Change the second title to "Aliens Described in the Model" 3. Fill out content, but also include images of the equations or use the inbuilt equation tool on wikipedia 4. I need to more division within my own work
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