Maw774
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:25, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
Wenbo Li Group's Peer review edit
Wenbo wan (talk) 21:11, 2 March 2018 (UTC)
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First of all, obviously this group has done a lot of work to add materials and information, this article is done very well it has a clean well organized structure, it has a great amount of information that educates you with all you need to know about the Helsinki Watch, including the history and the relationship with human right watch as we had not heard about what it is or what it is about, we now have been educated about the Watch. They have used good sources such as books and reliable websites. The article has a neutral point of view, it doesn't try to lead you to be with or against the subject.
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The only thing may could be improved is adding some picture to make this article more active. There wasn't much bad or things that we would change, maybe just that the article starts with the funding, and as we didn't know anything about the Helsinki Watch we think the article should start off with what it is, so the beginnings, then follow it with the how it was funded and the importance.