User talk:Mattbaranello/Digital economy

Things to work on for your Week 9 continued edits:

• Evaluate an article: Go back to your article evaluation and pull out the list of things you said you could improve on the existing article. Put that list here in the talk page and cross things off as you do them (you can also edit what I have said below and cross things off as you complete them).
• Copyedits: You did not do the Week 5 assignment, but you should go through the article you have assigned yourself and see if there are sections that need copyediting. Copy those sections, and then below that put the version with your edits bolded. Publish each as you go with explicit notes on what you changed from the original Wikipedia article. That way when you migrate your work to live Wikipedia you will be able to publish and explain each change as you go. Doing so is a required part of the Week 13 Wikipedia assignment.
• Bibliography: You did not do this week 6 assignment, and need to start building your bibliography.
• Citing sources: What you have done thus far is good (although promulgation seems a weird word to use in this context), but you need to add more and also make sure it is clear where in the existing Wikipedia article your additions will go. You also need to add citations to academic sources.
• Adding media/hyperlinks: You did not add the needed hyperlinks in Week 8, but as you continue you should go through and see if there are things that should be hyperlinked in whatever you add and the existing article. The image you added is fine, but be sure before you add media to the live Wikipedia article that it is actually necessary or contributes to the article (that is, you had to do it for this assignment, but in your final Wikipedia contributions don't add it just to add it).
• Overall: You seem to be doing things week by week, but now you really need to focus on the bigger picture of what you plan to add/edit here. Is there more in the existing article that needs copyediting? More citations you can use to expand on the sections you said were out of date or needed to be developed more? The more planning you can do now the easier it will be for you to chip away at those edits between now and November 22 when you need to move your final edits to live Wikipedia.

Adrishaw (talk) 17:19, 21 October 2020 (UTC)

Week 12 Feedback: You've responded to some feedback but as we've discussed you need to add more citations/content here to fulfill the requirements of the assignment overall. You should do that before moving edits to live wikipedia.Adrishaw (talk) 21:22, 18 November 2020 (UTC)