Ways to improve Jordan Schwartz

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Hello, Martinhusni,

Thank you for creating Jordan Schwartz.

I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

"Thought leader" is not a job. This needs toned down and written in a more neutral fashion.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, leave a comment here and begin it with {{Re|Famousdog}}. Remember to sign your reply with ~~~~. For broader editing help, please visit the Teahouse.

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Famousdog (woof)(grrr) 17:11, 23 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Famousdog:
Hi Famousdog! Thank you very much for the feedback. It is very helpful to improve the creation of articles. I will try to edit it to make it sound more neutral. Martinhusni (talk) 23:27, 23 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

I have sent you a note about a page you started

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Hi Martinhusni. Thank you for your work on Anabel González. Another editor, Chaotic Enby, has reviewed it as part of new pages patrol and left the following comment:

The fact that she served as Minister of Trade of Costa Rica appears to be a lot more important than many positions emphasized in the article, which is extremely resume-like for now. Technically notable per WP:NPOL, but a lot of cleanup needed.

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Chaotic Enby (talk · contribs) 12:53, 7 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Conflict of interest editing

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  Hello, Martinhusni. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on the page Anabel González, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for article subjects for more information. We ask that you:

In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Melcous (talk) 22:37, 18 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hi, thanks for your comments. I have no conflict of interest. I just was interested in write articles about global leaders. Could you tell me what else needs to remove the tag like resume? I see that you have made many improvements to the article and yet you have put the tag back in the article. Thanks again 190.193.56.205 (talk) 00:11, 19 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
Sorry, I thought I was logged in and replied without logging in. Martinhusni (talk) 00:21, 19 June 2024 (UTC)Reply