User talk:MarketBoiCYM/sandbox
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Peer Review edit
Hey There Nathan
Thank you for the constructive feedback.
I laid out a clear structure with the intention of adding more content. Later as additions are made, the proportionality of the article overall will become more balanced. Along with adding more sources I will look for benefits that come with synthetic farming as those do exist. This will aid in balancing the tone of the article. In conjunction with this addition, I will dumb down the tone in the solutions paragraph by providing contrasting views while buffing up my neutrality
In regard to sources, a majority of them are in downloadable pdf formats which means I cannot necessarily provide links but I can make references.
Overall, its a gritty topic but it does have quite the Life Assessment cycle and therefore it is pertinent to talk about. I'll see what I can do to make it shine. Kshea692 (talk) 04:55, 1 April 2019 (UTC)