User talk:Mardig94/sandbox
Peer review edit
Overall this is a really interesting topic! I like the level of expansion that the article goes into (i.e. from toxicity to mitigation measures). It helps provide for a complete analysis of the topic itself. One thing I would suggest would be to add your sources to your intro segment and perhaps to challenge some of the claims of previous contributors by adding in a citation needed tag from the wiki source editing mode. This would be need in the Oil spills section concerning the first paragraph. I would also suggest moving the info of the climate change section into your intro paragraph and removing the climate change section completely. Really nice job! Nick Hajaly (talk) 19:56, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
I looked into putting the climate change into the intro paragraph however I went into a lot of detail and would be too much for an introduction. However , I did add a lot of sources into each section I added 13 journals overall. Thanks for the help! Mardig94 (talk) 00:27, 28 February 2018 (UTC) Mardig94