Marcelorieg

Shelby's Peer Review

I would divide your article up into headings, even if the sections are short

Capitalize the I in "in 1852..."

Remove the "she" in "she moved to California"

Add an S at the end of school in "since public school"

Do you know when she remarried and got the Flood at the end of her name?

Is there any information available about her death?

It looks good!

Srbtx (talk) 22:51, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

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