User talk:Maka'alaKaono/Retjenu
Latest comment: 2 months ago by Traven Murphy in topic peer review
peer review edit
hey, filled out your peer review, It was pretty good so i wasn't able to find too many things for you to improve on.
excited to see the final project! Traven Murphy (talk) 20:51, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
Peer Review #2 I agree! Everything looks pretty good and coherent to me! I think adding more in the sections that are cut short is a good route to go to improve the article, since it already has a lot of pictures. Your grammar edits within the paragraphs also look good to me! Archaeologyslay (talk) 6:09 PM, 8 March 2024 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:602:981:1EA0:BCEF:E18D:F2E9:BFB (talk)