User talk:Lyricmoonstar/sandbox

Megan's peer review

Although your article has not been reconstructed yet, I like the way you used your sandbox as a copy & paste guide for your resources. It seems like you know where to get your information and what you want to share, you just have put it all in your own words!MTR34 (talk) 18:21, 17 February 2019 (UTC)

Hello Megan — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lyricmoonstar (talk • contribs) 01:10, 24 February 2019 (UTC)

Thank you for the input, Yes the edits and images portion is very tricky for me, I am still trying to get that finished.

Nicole article draft feedback

Hi, Eric!

You've drafted some good additions here, including some great context and clarity around this event! As you continue working on this, here are some things to think about:

• organization. What kinds of sections are in the table of contents of other articles about revolts or similar historical actions? How might the information already in the article plus your additions be organized into some similar sections?
• sources. You will want to make sure you are linking to a source in your reflist after each statement presented as fact (it might be helpful to review the adding citations training to get your reflist created and these links made)
• proofreading. Once you've completed all of your additions, you will want to carefully proofread your article work before incorporating it into the main article on this topic. Fragment sentences in particular are a good thing to be on the lookout for.
• what other material are you finding? What else are you still thinking about adding? Where have you already looked for sources, and where else might you still look to continue improving on this article?

I hope these notes are helpful, and I look forward to reading the final version of this! Nicoleccc (talk) 20:50, 18 February 2019 (UTC)