User talk:Luke Lofro/The Somali-Soviet Expedition of 1971

This draft is informative and thorough. The lead is especially strong, but it could use a sentence on why the expedition was significant. To improve the article as a whole, you will need to add in-text citations, links to other pages, and images, if possible (you can use the Wikiedu trainings or ask me for help.) Additionally, some of the language is too colorful and vague for an encyclopedia article (" quite a state of ruin", "a few years", etc). Clarify that Institute of African Studies is abbreviated IAN by adding it in parentheses. Your sources look reliable, but you may benefit from incorporating more. The structure is good and the content is neutral.Auggie456 (talk) 00:50, 13 March 2021 (UTC)