Louishill98
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Cupcakke
editPlease don't put "Gemini sun, Ares moon" (coincidentally, the same two birth positions as myself) into the first sentence of the biography. There's no citation to support it, and it's not important to her career.
Also, Wikipedia cannot be a cited source, per WP:CIRCULAR.
You introduced new ideas such as the Marilyn Monhoe persona into the lead section, without any discussion of those ideas in the article body. Per WP:LEAD, the article body is where you put new material, then you work backwards to summarize this stuff in the lead section.
You repeatedly cited your sandbox in this manner [[User:Louishill98/sandbox#cite note-:2-3|<sup>[4]</sup>]] All citations must appear in full format in the article, without referring to another page.
Thanks for giving it a shot. Binksternet (talk) 23:23, 14 May 2018 (UTC)