User talk:Loganorr0/sandbox

Comments on Bibliography

Logan: With the exception of the Hether and Byuchanon papers, it looks like you've pulled the relevant sources from the master list of references. In your bibliography, the complete citation should be written out (not just links). Njclum (talk) 16:52, 13 December 2017 (UTC)

Comments on Outline

Logan: Your section is only on the taxonomy of the species. This covers any different subspecies and the differences between them, and any known genetic differences among populations.Njclum (talk) 16:59, 13 December 2017 (UTC)

Comments on Rough Draft

Logan: The same holds for your rough draft. You should only be writing about taxonomy; the other topics belong to other students.Njclum (talk) 17:01, 13 December 2017 (UTC)