Loftelon
Your submission at Articles for creation: Seductive details (June 14)
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I liked your additions Krista, they really add some meat to the piece.
I made some significant changes. I moved your one sentence to the intro, Krista, and I changed the headings.
I just cleaned up the intro and made it more layperson friendly. I also elaborated on the Park study in the criticism section
I also added a little to the criticism section.
Check it out.
I also reposted it, ( I was excited to try again, and i only read your email just now.
by the way, I forgot to log in when I did these changes so all my edits are under my ip address: 24.84.16.105 whoops
Your submission at Articles for creation: Seductive details has been accepted
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Sulfurboy (talk) 17:31, 8 July 2015 (UTC)