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Hey Lmsvf6, I made some minor edits to your contribution to domestication, I would take a look at proofing it for more errors. I would highly recommend you work on making your section more approachable to a broader audience, to this end I would recommend bolding important words and adding links to other articles. I would try to simplify language whenever possible and add bullet points or whatever else you can. You have really interesting points, I would add a lot more citations as well. Whenever you make a claim there should be a citation so since you make a lot of claims you should add more, our professor's recommendation of 20-25 sources probably isn't enough for an article like yours but don't fear it really doesn't take much time to find and cite sources to back up your claims if you use something like "Web of Science". Overall good job. Moosebro (talk) 22:06, 3 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

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April 2018 edit

  Please do not add or change content, as you did at Domestication, without citing a reliable source. Please review the guidelines at Wikipedia:Citing sources and take this opportunity to add references to the article. Please be aware that you must not add material to Wikipedia without providing citations to reliable sources at the same time. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:26, 1 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

January 2022 edit

  You may be blocked from editing without further warning the next time you vandalize Wikipedia, as you did at Los Angeles Rams. oknazevad (talk) 01:03, 31 January 2022 (UTC)Reply