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Hello, I went ahead and included the COI disclosure on my user page. I do comms and marketing at the company in question (Shield AI). I have made changes to the post to make it less advertorial/editorialized.

Lilykhinz (talk) 22:41, 26 April 2022 (UTC)LilykhinzReply

Hi, thanks for the disclosure.
The draft needs to be neutral and it's still got a lot of glow. Also, read up on sources - references need to be via independent, reliable sources.
There is *so* much written about the company - fantastic job you're doing - ! You can write a great article. JSFarman (talk) 23:43, 26 April 2022 (UTC)Reply
Thanks. I have made some fairly significant changes. This is my first time ever creating an article on Wikipedia so I appreciate your patience as I trudge through it.
Lilykhinz (talk)Lilykhinz Lilykhinz (talk) 01:37, 27 April 2022 (UTC)Reply
Hi again. I believe the draft has closely paraphrased other articles/content I've read on the company. Can you give it an edit and make sure it is 100% your writing? And then give it an edit for tone? Get rid of the buzz words, the non-neutral language ("powered by Hivemind") and write in past tense. (Wikipedia is meant to be evergreeen.) And then we will be good to go. Smiley face. (Thanks!) JSFarman (talk) 23:37, 12 May 2022 (UTC)Reply
It is looking really good. I went in and changed "powered" and confirmed everything that should be past tense is past tense. I was going to try to add the company's logo and some images but that just isn't the priority right now. Lilykhinz (talk) 13:02, 13 May 2022 (UTC)Reply
The tone is still off and neutrality is more of a priority than images ever will be. I'll leave it alone from here on in - I don't think I am unbiased at this point - but I will remove the template and my now-unnecessary comment re: COI. JSFarman (talk) 17:19, 14 May 2022 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shield AI (May 24)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Shield AI has been accepted

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S0091 (talk) 17:11, 12 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shield AI V-BAT (May 25)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia. You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work. Marshelec (talk) 07:44, 25 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shield AI V-BAT (October 4)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Darling was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
darling (talk) 22:48, 4 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 15:08, 24 March 2024 (UTC)Reply