User talk:Lightsmith-saffron/Texas Lightsmith

Can anyone tell me how to reference a newspaper article that is not online...?Lightsmith-saffron (talk) 18:04, 9 September 2010 (UTC)

The paper does not have to be online in order to be referenced. You need only provide as much information as possible about the article. There is a template ({{cite news}}) that can help you create a standard newspaper article citation. Be sure to include, as a minimum, the name of the newspaper (and if the name is ambiguous, also the location where the paper is published), the name of the article, and the date of its publication. Preferred but not absolutely necessary is the name of the author and the page on which the article appeared. A standard citation to an article in the the New York Times might look like this:

Cooper, Helene (9 September 2010). "Obama Speaks Out Against Pastor’s Plan to Burn Koran". The New York Times. p. 2

The {{cite news}} template documentation will help you out with the citation. WikiDan61^ChatMe!_ReadMe!! 19:59, 9 September 2010 (UTC)

Review comments

Saffron -- I'm glad you've decided to get comments on your revised article. Here are the issues I see that should be resolve before the page can go "live".

1. It has no lede. A lede is an introductory paragraph that summarizes the rest of the page. As a minimum, it should read something like this:

   Texas Lightsmith is a Texas-based metalsmithing shop that specializes in home decor items such as ...

2. Several of your references (those from the Austin Library) are not reachable. The links refer to non-standard HTTP port numbers which may only be available to local patrons of the library and not to outside users.
3. The logo size in the infobox seems overly large. Inboxes are generally limited to 200 to 250 pixels.
4. As a minor point, you may want to watch your capitalization. There is a capital 'J' on "Joined" in the middle of the first sentence of the History section, and there are inappropriate capitals in the section headings. In general, only the first word of a section heading is capitalized, except for proper nouns.
5. I still do not believe you have established the notability of the company.
   1. The Dun and Bradstreet reference merely verifies that the company exists, not that it is notable.
   2. Neither the ADEX Awards nor the Design Journal that grants the awards appear to be notable in their own right, so the winning of these awards by your company is not especially notable.

   If you cannot resolve this major issue, fixing the rest of the issues will be pointless as the article will not be allowed to remain.

Given that I have already tagged your article for deletion once, it would be natural for you to doubt my neutrality in this regard. Therefore, I recommend that you get the opinion of another independent editor as well. -- WikiDan61^ChatMe!_ReadMe!! 19:59, 9 September 2010 (UTC)