Leo Palmaro
Thanks for your contributions to Revalize. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it is promotional and reads like an advertisement. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.
Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. GPL93 (talk) 17:11, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
- Hi GPL93,
- Thank you for your feedback on the Revalize article. We appreciate your guidance and have worked on improving the wording and content to better match Wikipedia's neutrality guidelines. We have also enhanced the structure to better separate the history of the company, including its formation background and acquisitions.
- We have re-submitted our page for approval and hope to hear back from you soon.
- Best regards,
- Leo Leo Palmaro (talk) 20:35, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- Who is "we"? C F A 💬 18:47, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
Managing a conflict of interest
editHello, Leo Palmaro. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on the page Draft:Revalize, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for article subjects for more information. We ask that you:
- avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization, clients, or competitors;
- propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (you can use the {{edit COI}} template);
- disclose your conflict of interest when discussing affected articles (see Wikipedia:Conflict of interest § How to disclose a COI);
- avoid linking to your organization's website in other articles (see Wikipedia:Spam § External link spamming);
- do your best to comply with Wikipedia's content policies.
In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.
Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. GPL93 (talk) 17:12, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Revalize (August 4)
edit- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Revalize and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.
Hello, Leo Palmaro!
Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! C F A 💬 18:46, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
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