User talk:Laurendunegan/sandbox
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Jay.Darbs in topic Janelle's Peer Review
Riane's Peer Review
editYour article is solid. You provided a good coverage of the information needed. You also provided several different perspectives of groups of Pennsylvanians on the subject matter. The only criticism I have for your article is that your sources are not listed, making it impossible for me to confirm your information.
Janelle's Peer Review
editI enjoyed the article. It was informational and concise. The only advice I would give is explaining your acronyms. (Ex: Pennsylvania Liquor Control Board (PLCB)) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jay.Darbs (talk • contribs) 14:23, 11 April 2018 (UTC)