User talk:LSUFish09/sandbox
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Josefhoracek in topic The Lead
Sources
editYou have good sources and a chance to put them to good use, but you'll have to do a little bit of writing (it doesn't have to be more than two or three sentences). The section on carbon fiber rods is very short, and half of the section is spent on fiberglass, which is a different material and should have its own section. You don't have to fix all the problems. Even a small edit would greatly improve what's there. Josef Horáček (talk) 02:11, 21 February 2016 (UTC)
The Lead
editYour lead looks good. There a few spelling errors: 1. no space before the comma in the first sentence; 2. "farm system" is lower-case. Go ahead and post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 13:18, 27 February 2016 (UTC)