Kwhite15
Joined 12 October 2015
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Josefhoracek in topic Copyediting
Kwhite15, you are invited on a Wikipedia Adventure! edit
Welcome edit
Hi, Kwhite15! Welcome to Wikipedia! Oscarortiz1 (talk) 17:04, 16 October 2015 (UTC)167.96.48.127 (talk) 17:00, 16 October 2015 (UTC)
Copyediting edit
I copy edited the article titled maternal bond. I added four commas.Kwhite15 (talk) 17:55, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
- I'm sorry to say that those commas didn't improve the writing. I recommend that you revert the change. Instead, you should delete the weasel word "carefully" from the phrase "a carefully controlled study." Josef Horáček (talk) 17:12, 29 October 2015 (UTC)