12/6/2018 Evaluation by NBasham1 edit

Spelling/Grammar: Nearly Meets Standards edit

  • Mostly good, there are some run on sentences like the second to last sentence in integration. Over is capitalized incorrectly in the first paragraph. Just give each paragraph a once-over to make sure

Language: Meets Standards edit

  • Seems good overall. Might want to tighten up professionalism on the first sentence of political response (receive hate).

Organization: Meets Standards edit

  • The piece is well-organized. Remove spaces before and after history heading.

Coding: Nearly Meets Standards edit

  • Need to put a Section Header for the Reference part

Validity: Exceeds Standards edit

  • Everything seems valid

Completion: Meets Standards edit

  • I can't think of anything to add

Relevance: Exceeds Standards edit

  • All parts seem relevant to the topic.

Sources: Nearly Meets Standards edit

  • The sources you have are good and what you'd expect, you're just short 4.

Citations: Meets Standards edit

  • Don't see a problem here

References: Meets Standards edit

  • Reference section is good.

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12/6/18 Evaluation by Forrest C. Bevington edit

Spelling/Grammar: Nearly Meets Standards edit

  • The first paragraph has good information, but there seems to be quite a few run on sentences with multiple grammar mistakes.

Language: Meets Standards edit

  • The language in your piece is good, but I think you could word your sentences better to create a better flow throughout your edit.

Organization: Meets Standards edit

  • Excellent organization, the only thing I would change is the placement of the "Status Of Urkrainians in Poland" and "Documents for Foreigners" like try to center those two to look better in terms of presentation.

Coding: Exceeds Standards edit

  • I don't see any issues with your code.

Validity: Exceeds Standards edit

  • Your information seems to be very valid with great information.

Completion: Exceeds Standards edit

  • Your piece is well written with great information. Not sure I see anything else that needs to be added.

Relevance: Meets Standards edit

  • Information is relevant to the topic of choice.

Sources: Nearly Meets Standards edit

  • You only have 16 so you need four more sources, but other than that sources look good.

Citations: Meets Standards edit

  • Great citations throughout your piece, but as mentioned above, you need 4 more sources.

References: Meets Standards edit

  • The references look good throughout your piece, but you could add a few more to create more professionalism.