User talk:KnightOrnstein/sandbox
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Joehen in topic Peer Review
Peer Review edit
This is a good start. All the information is good and the way you've presented it is clear. The indentation is kind of uncharacteristic of Wikipedia's style, though, and I think more sources could help you expand the information you have here, unless that information is meant for the history section. One problem I have with the Roman section is I feel like the first two sentences are conveying the same information. If the second sentence were excised, I think that section would flow better. I also think it would be worth including sections on later variations of the order, like the original article. Joehen (talk) 03:50, 27 October 2017 (UTC)